例如以下的例子,对于电影essay,电影中一幕场景的 Summary:
In this scene from the 2004 movie Shaun of the Dead, Shaun (played by Simon Pegg) wakes up with a hangover and walks to the convenience store to buy a soda and an ice cream. In his hungover condition, he does not notice anything that is going on around him. On his way to the store, he walks by what appears to be zombies roaming the street. There is mayhem all around him…
在commentary中,首先要避免过于主观性的词汇。在写作中,由于会带有许多个人见解,因此应当避免主观性的词汇,什么是主观性词汇,例如“I hope, I believe”等的词汇,这些短语会让论文感觉十分累赘。还有,根据教授的要求来写作,也许教授只需要一些意见观点,那么仅仅提供自己独到的见解就够了,还有如果教授需要你自由发挥,那么根据提供的要求来进行写作,将essay写好。